It looks nice, brother! I'd like to see you experiment with getting rid of the "ink" lines though... I don't think this piece needs them.
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Submitted by Velovich on Mon, 03/17/2008 - 16:32.
I agree with Boshuda, the "stash" is great. My ref does a good job of sticking in the whistle when in dialog, and I can just see, in my mind, the stash twitching as the guy talks.
The only thing I *might* suggest, and don't change anything if you don't wanna, is that one side keep the current coloration, the other be something like red or very yellow - this NPC appears in a club with different colored lights and that might convey that feel a little more.
V-Man
"All I need is more ammo, a little water, and some chips if you got them."
Submitted by Asok on Mon, 03/17/2008 - 13:39.
I like the sort of British-imperial style mustache. ;)
Boshuda
Submitted by ChurchClimbnRyan on Mon, 03/17/2008 - 14:58.
It looks nice, brother! I'd like to see you experiment with getting rid of the "ink" lines though... I don't think this piece needs them.
Submitted by Velovich on Mon, 03/17/2008 - 16:32.
I agree with Boshuda, the "stash" is great. My ref does a good job of sticking in the whistle when in dialog, and I can just see, in my mind, the stash twitching as the guy talks.
The only thing I *might* suggest, and don't change anything if you don't wanna, is that one side keep the current coloration, the other be something like red or very yellow - this NPC appears in a club with different colored lights and that might convey that feel a little more.
V-Man
"All I need is more ammo, a little water, and some chips if you got them."