Giant, Creepy Polis Massan Serial Killer [Asok]

Qwo

Member since: 2008

Hi!

I'm a GM getting things together to start up a game of some Saga Edition goodness. I'm a visual kinda guy, which extends over into how I portray stuff in games I GM. I like to show pictures!

And I really want a picture of the game's principal antagonist to show my players, but unfortunately there's nothing on the internet that even remotely approximates the character concept. I know it's a longshot, but I thought I'd try my luck with you folk. Here's the deets:

The Character: The villain is a Polis Massan serial killer named Kracz. Now, the Polis Massan are kind of unassuming little guys -- but not this one. Kracz was born deformed, with a rare genetic disorder (Polis Massan, being expert in all things medical, usually find ways to avoid genetic mutations) akin to gigantism in humans. As a child, he was as large as an adult. As an adult, he was twice as large as typical Polis Massan -- almost ten feet in height. His youth was endless torment. Polis Massan pride themselves in their homogenity, and so relentless teasing and mistreatment forever scarred poor Kracz. Instead of the medically savvy Polis Massan trying to fix the poor fellow's problems, they simply wished him to go away. (In their eyes, he was their mistake.) Which is just what happened, when Kracz and his parents seemed to perish in a horrible housefire on Kallidah.

In retrospect, however, our heroes learn that Kracz killed his parents in a rage and escaped from Kallidah to the stars, searching for a place he could truly fit in. When he was met with the same indignity he recieved on Kallidah, however, he turned once again to murder. The story continues.

Appearance: Owing to his gigantism, Kracz is about ten feet tall when hunched-over. At full height, he probably ranges upwards to fifteen feet. But he can never stand fully erect, because the gigantism makes his wiry Polis Massan frame nearly unsustainable. So he is forever hunched over, face forward, long arms dangling.

His clothing simply consists of layers of draped, ragged black cloth. A shawl is wrapped round his head -- his creepy, featureless white face is all that's visible of him. Underneath his clothes, an exoskeleton helps in supporting his enormous frame (it also lets him slam the players across the room like dolls). The exoskeleton is usually out of sight, hidden underneath the layers of clothes. It's rickety, consisting of haphazard pieces of metal framing. Most of it exists around his legs and shoulders.

And that's all, folks: Hopefully that's all there is! I'm quite proud of him, what's creepier than that featureless soulless-eyed Polis Massan face? I envisioned him with a bit of Hiyao Miyazaki in my head. I would absolutely be endebted to whatever brave soul takes this on.

Oh, and artistic license is wholly welcome. It could be a simple line drawing, colored, background, no background, I don't care. I'm thinking of just a simple colored body picture of Kracz on a white background, but again, it's completely up to you.

Asok

This is entirely boss pimp - the best villain I've come across in a long time! I feel I have to claim it...

Claim!

Boshuda

Qwo

That was infinitely faster than I expected :D

You're amazing bro, that womanizing Polis Massan artwork of yours partly inspired Kracz. Ah, the circle of life!

Qwo

Holy sweet jesus Asok -- that is amazing. Fast, too! Utterly impeccable. You captured him perfectly. I don't know how I can ever thank you enough!

Asok

I think you gave a spot-on description. I had this exact image in my head when I read it, and it just came out!

Boshuda

Asok

I posted it on DeviantArt, but it should come up on the front page here shortly...

Boshuda

Rozali

oh I see it.
COOLL!! me like alot
love that neckwear
Rozali

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