I finally have time to part the clouds and impart a "first draft" for perusal and approval. I've deviated from the description here and there, opting for a more symbolic representation of the Mulls' relationship; I'd like to know if the changes are acceptable. First, rather than place any troops in the background I decided to bring them (well, one of them) forward, to be painted half and half. I've put Obar in a disturbingly small loincloth rather than a toga-like robe, but can redraw that should this not work. Also, I've given Seema a personal hairstylist (which wasn't described) to help convey the luxury of her lifestyle, but it seems to throw the picture out of balance a little, and I'd like to give Obar something/someone as well. Does he have a penchant for slave girls, or perhaps a valet droid?
I.J. Thompson, what do you think? Does the symbolism of the scene work? Is there enough corpulence?